Post by Miss Gates on Sept 22, 2019 13:15:05 GMT -7
This story is inspired by people who slip into comas. I really do want to turn this into a book so please let me know if you have any ideas! Especially other characters or other notes. This is completely open. This story is about people who fall into comas and how they get out of it. Sort of like a waiting in limbo and it depends on each person's past if they can come back from it or not. Here are some characters:
Derek Langston (admin)
Dr. Willoberg (admin)
2nd doctor (unknown)
3rd doctor (unknown)
Nurse (unknown)
And any other and all characters are welcome! If you want Derek to enjoy his coma because of any type of romantic relationship that comes into play or if he just enjoys life, please feel free! I'm open to anything!
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Derek Langston opened his eyes. He slowly regained consciousness. As he opened his eyes, he noticed where he was. It appeared that he was in a hospital room. The walls were salmon pink and he was in a bed with beeping monitors next to him. The floors were a glossy white and the people in front of him were dressed in doctor’s uniforms. There were at least three doctors and a nurse. At least that’s who they appeared to be to Derek. Three people in white, doctor lab coats and one person in scrubs. Derek thought for a moment. What was he doing here? He wondered. He was...He couldn’t remember what he was doing before. His heart started to beat fast in his chest. Panic arose in his throat and he croaked,
“What am I doing here?”
“Easy now Mr. Langston,” one of the male doctors said. “You’re safe. We promise.”
“I don’t know who any of you are!” Derek suddenly yelled, making the four individuals jump. “How can you promise that?”
“Derek, do you look like you’re in danger?” another male doctor snapped. “Please, try to calm down. It’s important. You took quite a fall.”
“What are you talking about?” Derek asked them with an impatient attitude.
A male doctor came forward and offered his hand to Derek. “Hello Derek,” he said. “I’m Dr. Willoberg.” He paused. “What is the last thing that you remember?”
Derek shrugged and suddenly felt calmer. “I’m not sure. I don’t even remember how I got here. I just remember my name and that’s it.”
“You don’t remember anything else?” Dr. Willoberg asked. “Like what you were doing beforehand or what happened to you?”
Derek shook his head in confirmation. The doctors all looked at each other with a worried look. Derek was starting to feel like he was being mistreated. Everyone in the room looked at him like he was crazy, which he felt insulted by because he knew his name at least. He just hadn’t remembered how he got inside that room. Where was his girlfriend? Where was his family? Derek wondered. This was all starting to be strange.
Derek Langston (admin)
Dr. Willoberg (admin)
2nd doctor (unknown)
3rd doctor (unknown)
Nurse (unknown)
And any other and all characters are welcome! If you want Derek to enjoy his coma because of any type of romantic relationship that comes into play or if he just enjoys life, please feel free! I'm open to anything!
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Derek Langston opened his eyes. He slowly regained consciousness. As he opened his eyes, he noticed where he was. It appeared that he was in a hospital room. The walls were salmon pink and he was in a bed with beeping monitors next to him. The floors were a glossy white and the people in front of him were dressed in doctor’s uniforms. There were at least three doctors and a nurse. At least that’s who they appeared to be to Derek. Three people in white, doctor lab coats and one person in scrubs. Derek thought for a moment. What was he doing here? He wondered. He was...He couldn’t remember what he was doing before. His heart started to beat fast in his chest. Panic arose in his throat and he croaked,
“What am I doing here?”
“Easy now Mr. Langston,” one of the male doctors said. “You’re safe. We promise.”
“I don’t know who any of you are!” Derek suddenly yelled, making the four individuals jump. “How can you promise that?”
“Derek, do you look like you’re in danger?” another male doctor snapped. “Please, try to calm down. It’s important. You took quite a fall.”
“What are you talking about?” Derek asked them with an impatient attitude.
A male doctor came forward and offered his hand to Derek. “Hello Derek,” he said. “I’m Dr. Willoberg.” He paused. “What is the last thing that you remember?”
Derek shrugged and suddenly felt calmer. “I’m not sure. I don’t even remember how I got here. I just remember my name and that’s it.”
“You don’t remember anything else?” Dr. Willoberg asked. “Like what you were doing beforehand or what happened to you?”
Derek shook his head in confirmation. The doctors all looked at each other with a worried look. Derek was starting to feel like he was being mistreated. Everyone in the room looked at him like he was crazy, which he felt insulted by because he knew his name at least. He just hadn’t remembered how he got inside that room. Where was his girlfriend? Where was his family? Derek wondered. This was all starting to be strange.